Ballora v4 | ThrPuppet

Ballora don't look that bad, she had good and accurate colors, has accurate modeling, almost everything is alright, the only mistake i see... is the render. The image is too simple, too "bad" to promote your model, you can see the background is... it has no bakground, you need a black background or a grey (really grey) background because this hard to see, you have no background just behind a white face and that is distractiing as hell. Also the ligthning, i can see you used 3 lights, just because there are just 3 shadows. Okay, you can use 3 shwadowa, it's okay, but change the sadow mode pls, the back shadow looks like you put it in photoshop. There are 3 types of shadow in C4D, and this one is the worst if you don´t use it right.

Now, the minireenas, they look... bad, their materials look really reflective, change the specular. The face look's like is smiling, looks cute but it's not accurate, the body needs more detail, looks just too flat and the original minireenas are more rounded.